Buisness Letter Order

Hi. How argon you? I dont think you remember me. I am a your niece Your name thrice removed. I am Evelyns little girl. You visited us last Christmas. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you how much fun I had that Christmas getting to k at present you all everywhere again. I acceptd to keep in touch with you after Christmas. Remember when I told you about the business venture I do with Christie? You remember Christie? shes your other neice, my cousin. You also met her at Christmas.Christie is the girl with the long dark hair and dark eyes. Shes is the mostfriendly person you could ever so meet. Well, you saw that when you met her at Christmas. Shes a pictorial artist and graduated valedictorian. Christie receives so many job offers from major companies, even DISNEY Shes married now with a baby. The baby is adorable. Her husband is a really nice guy. The baby is one year old, and her name is Isabel. As for me, I am a graphic artist too and also a computer expert. I graduated just this year. Christie and I incur invested in a space for a origin we want to open at the huge centre of attention at Rockaway in New Jersey where we live.It is a custom designed induct basket come in for all occasions. Though the huge Rockaway mall stores are varied, they are lacking a store, which provides something more personal to the public. There are too many stores, which lie of cold impersonal items such as electronics, Order31114685 Pg. 2 clothes, music, on the first floor. Books, videos games, furniture, on the second floor, food, toys, shoes on the third, computer disks, thimbles, exotic furniture, movies, hand over clothes, on the fourth. Desks, paper products and hair brushes etc on the fifth.Appliances on the sixth, hair cutters and fur coats on the seventh. I know these items washstand lookm personal, however not as personal as a customized gift basket. Our idea is to open a store in the mall as well as a realistic storefront on the Internet. Christie and I spend a penny already accumulated 100,000 in seed money between us however were going to pack a little more to make our dream a reality. But let me first tell you about our little store before I ask you for the money. Christie and I are thinking of a huge friendly store designed for people to enter andleisurely choose inside colorful bins fill with personal items such as stuffed bears, pretty personalized stationary, candy, pretty colored pens and pencils, plastic jewelry (The kind you would find in a bubble mumble machine) and all scents of perfume oil all forare low price. The design for our store is openly friendly. Tall walls painted a sunny yellow color, greet the customers are greeted as they arrive. The concept is for people to be able to enter our store and freely look over our inventory inside the bins to choose what they want to have fortheir gift basket. The customers then will arrive at the cashier, pay for the items and choose what customized gift basket you want. Our cust omers will choose from a large portfolio of different types of gift baskets for all occasions, painted with rich bright colors, custom-made by Christie. Her specialty is a yellow and brown celophane wrapped gift basket in the see of Spongebob Squarepants. She paints the straw baskets and stuffs them for the customers herself. Order31114685 Pg. 3 The competition as I said before Aunt Betty, is non-existentThey are all cold and impersonal electronics, and we think boring. We see that they have a normal amount of customers streaming in and out of these stores, however it will definitely not be as much as there will be coming into our stores. Like I said before, our gift baskets are for all occasions and are already in demand. We have orders for Birthdays, holidays, weddings, christenings and anniversaries. The list is very long and is getting longer as word gets out since finishing our website. Our virtual store on the Internet is expertly done, if I shouldsay so myself with colorful pictures of the assortment of the many gift baskets we can create and Christie and myself. I also included our history as computer graphic designers and has generated over 200 orders already with over 100 orders in backorders. We have money already, over $200. 00 however we need some more to keep this dream going. We can save you money, legally as a small business tax exemption that will make you a lot more money in future, Aunt Betty. Socially, we will be famous as we make more money for you globally as well as nationally.The truth is people nowadays would rather give a gift that is personal instead of something cold and impersonal like an electronic something which needs batteries every two weeks. I hope to hear from you soon, after you receive this letter, Aunt Betty and see you this coming Christmas. Maybe then you can see the space we have rented out in the mall for our store. I am sure you will like it. Best wishes. Sincerely, Your signature Your name -Works Cited- The Little , Brown Handbook fourth Edition H. Ramsey Fowler Jane E. Aaron Copyright ? 1989 by Scott, Foresman and Company.